oh God it’s mocking me
March 20, 2008
oh God its mockin me
it loves betrayin me
goes in circles spinnin me
so i dont ask why me
but why NOT me
why cant i be like everyone else
why cant i be the real “myself”
n why … oh God why
why cant everything be a LIE?
… its cuz the sick are dyin
n their eyes are beggin
to live for em
to pray for em
n if i dont, then who
if i die, whos left
if i lose, whatll i do
if i stop, thats THEFT
of someone else’s death…
ill fight the devils, til my last breath
March 10, 2009 at 10:50 pm
hmmm… funny how i thought it only happen in my my life..
He’s mocking and laughing for sure … hahaha
on how desperate we are, trying so hard to figure his big plan.
lovely poem BTW
March 10, 2009 at 10:56 pm
Hi cholericjournal
Actually, the poem wasn’t about how God mocks us. It was actually about how the devils play with our desires, throwing them in our faces over and over as if in a mockery that there is NO WAY we can overcome those temptations. It’s a cry out to God in a sense for some sort of protection so that we may succeed. Keep going.
Thank you for your comment!